That sentence does end rather abruptly doesn't it? It would definitely be better fleshed out, I quite agree.
Oh, I know there should be an accent on the 'i' but I am such a computer moron I don't know how to do it! You'll find it's the same throughout everything I write. Some words I just avoid using, but others like Theoden, for instance, I'm stuck with!
But thank you so much for taking the trouble to point all that out; I really do appreciate it, and I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
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branchandroot
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Date: 2008-08-05 06:28 pm (UTC)That sentence does end rather abruptly doesn't it? It would definitely be better fleshed out, I quite agree.
Oh, I know there should be an accent on the 'i' but I am such a computer moron I don't know how to do it! You'll find it's the same throughout everything I write. Some words I just avoid using, but others like Theoden, for instance, I'm stuck with!
But thank you so much for taking the trouble to point all that out; I really do appreciate it, and I'm glad you enjoyed the story.